Virgil
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Re: Finite Rings
Posted:
Feb 6, 2013 3:41 AM
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In article <Pine.NEB.4.64.1302052056190.7140@panix1.panix.com>, William Elliot <marsh@panix.com> wrote:
> On Tue, 5 Feb 2013, Tonicopm@yahoo.com wrote: > > > Rant and rave, depraved unto grave, > > > while the trivial becomes dead prey, > > > the original problem still rings, > > > with no one dinging a ping nor daring a fling. > > > > Er..."rings" doesn't rhyme with "fling" . Try again, please. > > It's no crime to have some grime with my rhyme. > I've gotten a poetic license for some smiley slime, > a plastic poetic license with chimes for a mere dime.
The rhyme is better but the meter sucks. --
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