Date: Feb 6, 2013 3:41 AM
Author: Virgil
Subject: Re: Finite Rings

In article <Pine.NEB.4.64.1302052056190.7140@panix1.panix.com>,
William Elliot <marsh@panix.com> wrote:

> On Tue, 5 Feb 2013, Tonicopm@yahoo.com wrote:
> > > Rant and rave, depraved unto grave,
> > > while the trivial becomes dead prey,
> > > the original problem still rings,
> > > with no one dinging a ping nor daring a fling.

> >
> > Er..."rings" doesn't rhyme with "fling" . Try again, please.

>
> It's no crime to have some grime with my rhyme.
> I've gotten a poetic license for some smiley slime,
> a plastic poetic license with chimes for a mere dime.


The rhyme is better but the meter sucks.
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