Talk:Simple Harmonic Motion
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Thanks for reviewing my page! - Peng
Very nice, Peng. My only changes would be some modest grammatical suggestions.
Hey, Peng! This is a great helper page. I really like the animations and I think you have done a good job of explaining things step by step. I only have two small comments,
In your first figure, the caption says "weight on a spring." Since you refer to it as a "mass" in the text I would just change the caption to be consistent.
The appendix is very well organized, it just might be helpful to say something at the beginning like
- "The below derivation comes from James Stewart's Second-Order Linear Differential Equations.To read his article, click here (with a link).
Just because your pdf link at the bottom brings the reader to the article, but there is no title/author in the preview doc. You could keep the link at the bottom and just explain there, I think either would work!
just some suggestions!
- Fixed! Thanks~ - Peng